User:Gcecchi2/Ban Kao Archaeological Site/MKnightingale Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LZU21, Westontengan1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gcecchi2/Ban Kao


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ban Kao

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer Review: Ban Kao

There is an already existing Wikipedia page, so some work has already been done.

Currently the lead for the page is very minimal. It could be expanded upon to include some of its history and archaeology work. Even just a brief summary would expand that section greatly.

The information in the sandbox page gives some good information on the geography of the area, which is useful for anyone unfamiliar with the site, but if possible try to focus on any archaeological finds related to the site. The original page does have a bit of information regarding skeletal remains found, but if there are other artifacts that have been found there, look into discussing those. If there has been very little found, maybe go into why that is the case. Has it been heavily looted? Or has there just not been any archaeological fieldwork done there yet. Sometimes the sources that are available will explain why they don’t have more information, so it might be worth going back over the sources already present.

Even if you use a source already present on the published page, still include it in your sandbox page so people know where your information is coming from.

You do have connections to other Wikipedia pages, which extends the possible reach of your page. Though I don’t think it is necessary to link to the general page about mountains.

The current article already has some pictures, but if you can find any that are specific to the archaeological finds that you can use without copyright infringement, add those.