User:Gclarke2103/Women in Chad/NateLentz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gclarke2103


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gclarke2103/Women in Chad
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women in Chad

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Grace, you have done a really effective job expanding on this article. Your lead is great, but maybe should include some references to the new sections you have added in your article about family structure, education, cultural practices, and advocacy. The content you've added in the sections I have mentioned is excellent, the updated ones are much more robust, and the new ones shed much needed light on the overall topic of women in Chad. There are some sections that lack citations, so maybe adding a couple more references in those could help clear up some of the information contained in them. The cultural practices section seems like its still in progress, but even reading it, I was thinking that it could be a good place to put some photos, if there are any open source ones available. I had tried looking for some for my project and couldn't seem to figure out how to work the image search in wikipedia, but maybe you'll have more luck finding stuff. Overall, everything you have written is concise, neutral, and highly informative. Great work!