User:Gcmorgan/District of Columbia V. Exxon Mobil Corp/KG222 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gcmorgan, Eman3502, Jerseymike7, Yellow78, Acruss21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gcmorgan/District_of_Columbia_V._Exxon_Mobil_Corp?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead very clearly establishes the purpose of this page and gives and accurate overview of the lawsuit while remaining concise. One point of extra detail could be to add links to other Wiki pages, for example, links to the other similar cases. This would help the readers connect this situation to others that may be more well-known. Similarly, references aren't in yet but will add to the page in a similar way and enforce the facts with references. The writing had a very formal tone and lacked bias towards either side of the court case. As for content, many different aspects of the case were explained and I felt all my questions were answered. Overall the content was very well organized and flowed well.