User:Gcoale/Naomi Livesay/Seburr Peer Review

General info
seburr
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gcoale/Naomi Livesay
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):no published article let

Lead

 * Very informative and well written lead, it clearly and concisely introduces the rest of the article.

Content

 * maybe see if you can find any sources with some early life information, that is a common thing I see in wikipedia article and I think that would be interesting.
 * if she has any books or journals that she has contributed to, maybe include a list of those
 * also a list of awards, if any, could be useful

Tone and Balance

 * very neutral and informative tone - I think your pretty good at getting the information across without implying any bias

Sources and References

 * The links/citations that I checked all worked, so your all good on that front.

Organization

 * I see that you started a personal life section - if that is going to include early life maybe put it before her career just so that it reads more like a timeline