User:Geisinsj7254/Texas blues/Panellmi6154 Peer Review

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I am reviewing User:Geisinsj7254/sandbox on Texas Blues.

==== '''In your lead, I don't think you necessarily need the line, "The twelve-bar, three-line rules are the most fastened and obvious form. However, not all Texas blues music obey this pattern." I think better fits in one of your paragraph, as I think of the lead as a way to really spark interest in your audience as well as give a brief introduction.''' ==== '''You contributed a lot of really great information to this article! I thought was organized nicely in a chronological order. Really good citations and uses of links to other pages, it adds a lot of credibility as well as help people seek more information from what you referenced in your article. One thing I think you could add is maybe bringing it up to present day and focusing on how the revolution of blues is seen today. You did mention artist using similar guitar methods as Stevie however I think it would be cool to see how the genre evolved into present day as genres are always changing. Like what artists would be influenced by blues and how the style has changed in the 21st century. Some other information you could add would be more information on when Blues formed, how did society react and what was it seen as during that time.You have good facts about the topic but i think you could go a step further and connect it the societal impacts and how it was used. Maybe even mentioning by Blues became so popular during that time.'''

'''Overall your added content is very neutral and non biased, this is a good informative topic. However the line "Arguably one of the most influential Texas bluesmen to come out of Texas was T-Bone Walker." could be worded a little differently to be more informative opposed to persuasive.'''

I can tell you put a lot of research and effort in this and it overall is really well done, just needs a few tweaks!