User:Gemar145/Sextuple bond/Achia UW Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Gemar145
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Sextuple bond

Lead

 * My classmate has made made changes to the lead because they added more about the gaseous theory of sextuple bonds. Further, they have made it quite specific, which might need to be changed for the sake of audience understanding. However, for the chemists reading this article, I believe they have done a great job with their level of detail.

Content

 * My peer has done a great job with the references and conveying the information. While the inclusion of historical papers was necessary, there is also greater use of modern papers and current research to bolster the article's explanations. I would say that the content is a bit hard to read from a technical aspect, but this may also be difficult to account for given the nature of the subject.

Tone and Balance
The tone and balance are definitely present, with ample use of evidence from both review and primary articles. The writing itself is easy to comprehend and avoids flowery explanations. However, the technicality could be difficult for some readers to understand, so changing some of it may be worth considering.

Sources and References

 * The content links do work and for the most part lead to papers that are reviews. While the ideal would mean no primary articles, this topic requires some evidence from them to help illustrate the point. The use of data from them especially is good for readers to better realize where and when this type of bonding occurs.

Organization
The author has done a great job with expanding the content and situations within this topic. However, I might introduce the basic science early on before jumping into the specific cases presented by the author.

Overall impressions

 * Great article that needs some changes to the technicality of the content. Else-wise, the author has done a great job explaining and improving this subject.