User:Gemjk19/Performing arts/Ars010 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gemjk19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gemjk19/Performing arts - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Performing arts - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that they have done a great job so far of editing their article. The article itself has a lot of good information already, and they took the time to read through the article and find parts that needed sources and add appropriate sources. I think that the organization of the article is great, it is very easy to find the information you are looking for. It would be easy for them to add to the sections that do not have any information under them like the history of performing arts in Africa, Oceania, and the United States.