User:Gemjk19/Performing arts/Hmr005 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Gemjk19

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Creating User:Gemjk19/Performing arts/Hmr005 Peer Review - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Performing arts - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Adding the citations made the article more credible and more accurate. The segment about Japan is worded very well and has credible information. The sources you cited are credible. You have a neutral viewpoint and you displayed accurate information. I see you haven't inserted the entire segment about Iran into the article yet. You also take a neutral standpoint in that segment with neutral information. When you put it in, make sure you don't forget to cite. It looks very good so far.

Thank you for the feedback, will do.~