User:Georgialeakey/Islamic Cairo/Georgialeakey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shakera Patterson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Georgialeakey/Islamic Cairo


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Islamic Cairo

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Shrine and Mausoleums section:

The information is clearly written, is unbiased, and well-formatted. The information highlights more information about shrines and mausoleums in Islamic Cairo, which is an underrepresented and underdeveloped subject on Wikipedia. The article is now more complete because of the added information, and very much positively contributed to art historical perspectives within this article.

One thing that needs to be edited is that there are no citations imbedded into the wikipedia article. I suggest that the author goes through their edits and adds citations after each sentence/piece of newly introduced information. Otherwise I am unsure that their edits will be accepted by Wikipedia.

Well done! Very imformative.