User:Georgialeakey/Islamic Cairo/IslamicArt22 Peer Review

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Georgialeakey

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, this is a well developed article. The content added is relevant to the topic and you maintain a neutral tone to the article. A suggestion I have would be to clarify that the names: Bab al-Nasr, Bab al-Futuh, and Bob Zuwayla, are gate names. I was a bit confused what the significance was until I further read the article. Further, these gates deal with official names and then you mention names of the architects who helped to rebuild the gates. I would try to make these differences as clear as possible. Otherwise, this is a strong article and nice citations!