User:Georgialeakey/Islamic Cairo/Joe.harkins.richmond Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Georgialeakey and Shakera Patterson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Georgialeakey/Islamic Cairo


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Islamic Cairo

Evaluate the drafted changes
You guys provided information about a lot of good examples of architecture in Islamic Cairo. I would suggest adding citations to the section about the al-Hussein Mosque. This section also had a couple of minor grammatical errors and sentences that could be worded a little bit more clearly, but provided solid information about the complex. I think the section about the Mausoleum of Imam al-Shafi’i should open with a sentence or two introducing and explaining what the mausoleum is. The Tomb of Sayyida Ruqayya section doesn’t cite any sources, but has a great physical description of the tomb. I’m not sure what the last sentence of this sentence “The arch from the outside is lobed fit as a fiddle” means. The Walls and Gates section does a great job of backing up statements with sources.