User:Georgialeakey/Islamic Cairo/Shakera Patterson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Georgia Leakey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Georgialeakey/Islamic Cairo

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you added way more information to the Walls and gates section than what was given previously. How did you find the sources that you came up with? How are you certain that these sources are factual? What made you decide to edit this section in particular?

I've noticed that you added more information about the design of each wall and gate. Great job in mentioning the reconstruction of the gates. That adds context to facts about its upkeep.

I would recommend that you separate the sections into separate parts that describe each wall and gate that you're referencing.