User:GermanShepherdMom1/Criminal psychology/Nelson0226 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GermanShepheredMom1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Criminal psychology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Criminal psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
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During the Peer evaluation and after reading the contributions and changes, the work is good so far. I notices that in the talk section there was a note regarding the out of date cites which is a great catch. Adding a whole paragraph with the correct citations and links provided the extra detail the source was lacking. The big example given and talking about race playing a huge role in criminal psychology was tons of new information I learned while reading your article. The feedback from me is to keep adding work and details while maintaining proper citations and links.