User:GersonCool/Lifelong learning/Nrjohns1 Peer Review

GersonCool emphasizes lifelong learning and cognitive reserve to prevent a global dementia issue due by an aging society. GersonCool cites studies and statistics on cognitive deterioration, healthcare costs, and lifelong learning to back his claim. GersonCool states that early intervention and education in preventing age-related neurodegenerative disorders and that they believe that free and low-cost education could improve public health. Despite the fact the article recognizes the existence of critics and the possibility of limitations in the area of research, the argument might be strengthened even further if it addressed these concerns in a more in-depth manner. Finally, addressing counterarguments would have strengthened the article.

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