User:GersonCool/Week 6

Week 6 assignment (from Word doc Summer 2023 - IDS 2002 Asynchronous)

''Assignment: Outline and Identify what you think is missing from your Wiki article. Be as thorough as possible. You can submit this information by creating a new sandbox in Wikipedia. Submit a link to this sandbox in Moodle.''

I still need to figure out how to add citations to my contribution. (This was also pointed out by my peer reviewer!)

My article still needs a bit of clarification, and could likely benefit from some additional verbiage to help the reader transition between the information points. I am struggling a bit with the "neutral point of view thing," as I've been out of college for a while now and my everyday writing is more focused on being persuasive than neutral. However, I understand the need for neutrality in this situation, as readers aren't looking to Wikipedia to be persuaded about a topic (just as people read my everyday writing specifically for persuasion.)

I'm not sure that I'm satisfied with the conclusion of my article. I find myself vacillating between liking it and wanting to revise and expand on it. I hope that once I've completed my final edits I will have a better idea of my thoughts on the conclusion.

I would like to add some wikilinks to my article to enable readers to discover more information about this valuable topic.

I also need to figure out the process for making my article live. I've read a few things about this step, and don't want to make any errors, as a few sites have made it seem like adding such a large amount of information at one time can cause errors.