User:Gf6f3/Sugar baby/Aysiagrey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MichalyLong, Gf6f3,  SophieVMoon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gf6f3/Sugar_baby?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sugar baby

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article does well at giving a basic explanation of the term and how its used and what its referring to. I think there could be better cultural references made and more explanation to who is using the term and making it popular and why. Some possible information that can be added to this article is more. I also think more information could be provided under prevalence and making more connections than just to students. I think that adding a prevalence page to my article could be very beneficial.