User:Gf6f3/Sugar baby/Lilurkel44 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gf6f3, MichalyLong, SophieVMoon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gf6f3, MichalyLong, SophieVMoon
 * Gf6f3, MichalyLong, SophieVMoon

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead is not overly detailed and does a good job describing the topic. However, it does not give enough information about why the topic is important today and it does not truly give a purpose to the article.

Content
The article is pretty short and gives brief descriptions of the topics. The latest study quoted in the article is 2018 so adding more relevant sources and information would help the article.

Images & Media
There are literally no images in the article. Adding images would help give readers context for some of the topics.