User:Gf6f3/Sugar baby/MNC-2016 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gf6f3, MichalyLong, SophieVMoon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * No draft available


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sugar baby

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sugar baby

Lead Section


 * Discussion of “sugaring” in non-Western cultures (if this is applicable to other cultures)
 * Expansion of potential sexual relationships

Prevalence


 * Give examples on what websites are used
 * Discussion on history of sugar baby
 * Prevalence in other time periods?
 * Discussion of sugaring in other cultures

Legality and Comparison to Sex Work


 * Not much needed
 * Discussion of other sites that may have had discussed this topic
 * More discussion on courtesan
 * Discussion of craigslist and Ashley Madison in how they operate for sugar babies

Overall expansion of the article is needed to include more information on sugar babies in general.