User:Gfs634/Dura-Europos synagogue/Ed8795 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gfs634


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gfs634/Dura-Europos_synagogue?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dura-Europos synagogue

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think move the footnotes outside of the period?

Love these details about comparing the painting to Roman military structures.

The article section is well-organized, well-cited/sourced, and written objectively. The visual analysis is helpful: it provides good analysis and points out details without being unfounded or subjective.

There is a balanced amount of jargon and easy to understand language. All jargon is linked to the Wikipedia page that provides its definition.

I would maybe make the image that you're focusing on (of Moses and the Israelites) larger.