User:Gg808/Cherokee Female Seminary/Carali0128 Peer Review

General info
Gg808
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Cherokee Female Seminary
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cherokee Female Seminary

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a lot that you have done and it is finished other than a two things. The first is you need a header for your first topic at the beginning. It will help the reader understand what information they are reading. Also, the tone needs to be more neutral. You use words that describe things in a way that you are experiencing and giving your opinion. The article as a whole is well written and organized. I like that there is multiple pictures. You have many sources which are good and the I like the topics you chose to focus on.