User:Gg808/Cherokee Female Seminary/Ehail773 Peer Review

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Lead- "The Cherokee were the first Native American Female seminaries were a larger cultural movement across the United States in the mid-nineteenth century" This sentence kind of confused me, I think what you are trying to say is that the Cherokees were the first Native tribe to have female seminaries. If I'm wrong, maybe just try to clean up this sentence in your lead. I think all around though you give good background into the creation of the school. One thing I would say to add is maybe a little fact about how the Cherokee valued women's education, you do a little bit in your "Institutional History" paragraph, but I think this wouldn't benefit your lead paragraph as well to give background on the tribe.

Organization- I think your organization is great in your separation of Location, history, student life, etc. This I would not change at all

Images- I definitely think you should include a picture of the original school and obviously the one made after. maybe some pictures of students in and around the school. And if there are pictures of students who went back in the day that are alive still definitely them as well.

Overall I think your organization of your information is what makes this so great, it's very easy to read and your facts lead on to one another. Once you had images, and continue to add more info I think you have a really solid page.