User:Gg808/Cherokee Female Seminary/Noahjack2001 Peer Review

This article is really good and well established. I found myself getting lost in all the details, but I want to reiterate that the details you have a good to have but at some points of reading gets too lengthy to read. I like the sources and references you have. Maybe explain why the location and property mattered to the Cherokee. In the section titled Student life and curriculum, I feel like its not very needed unless you insert maybe a sentence or two talking about how the students liked the school. also maybe explain why they have separate schools for male and females? you can also give a reason why the first school burned down. all and all this article is a great starting point for your final draft.

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