User:Gheizer/Ethiopian art/Igotnooname Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gheizer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gheizer/Ethiopian_art?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ethiopian art

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article addresses a content gap in the existing Wikipedia page of Ethiopian art. The lead is strong as it introduces the significance of Ethiopian manuscripts as Ethiopia is located at the confluence of various cultures and religions. This section reflects multiple aspects of he manuscript - text, ornamentation, cultural background, and the difficulty in studying and preservation of the manuscripts. A comprehensive discussion of the manuscript allows readers to have a relatively holistic understanding of it. The second paragraph briefly describes the Khalili manuscript, which I think is helpful for readers to visualize what an Ethiopian manuscript looks like. It would be better if there are pictures accompanying the description. Overall, the tone is neutral. The sources seem to be reliable and up-to-date; the links are active. Statements made in the article are properly cited as well. I like the last paragraph revealing the current challenges posed to scholars in this field because it discusses the various behind the fabulous manuscripts that hinder further studying of them.

While the content is informative and comprehensive, it seems a little overwhelming at first sight as it is a bit long. Perhaps breaking the section into smaller sub-sections would make it seem less overwhelming and easier for readers to find the material that they are interested in. Also, you might want to go over the article to check for minor grammatical errors to make sure that it is free of errors when published on Wikipedia.