User:Ghirardellyz/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Bendopnea


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article goes straight to the point, it does not give detailed information for people to get aware of the drastic situation they pass through if they suffer from bendopnea. When people start getting symptoms, they search for information about different cases. This article needs to be more informative, especially because it is a very fragile failure.


 * Sources
 * Baeza‐Trinidad, R., Mosquera‐Lozano, J. D., & El Bikri, L. (2017). Assessment of bendopnea impact on decompensated heart failure. European Journal of Heart Failure, 19(1), 111-115.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Dislocation of hips in animals


 * Article Evaluation
 * When searching for dislocation of animals, what everyone tries to look for, is for cures and/or treatments. This article does not have enough information of the treatment of the animals. It does have, but not the quantity it's supposed to. It is very difficult for us humans, to understand or be aware of the pain animals are passing through.


 * Sources
 * Duff, S. R., & Bennett, D. (1982). Hip luxation in small animals: an evaluation of some methods of treatment. The Veterinary record, 111(7), 140-143.
 * Langenskiöld, A., Sarpio, O., & Michelsson, J. E. (1962). Experimental dislocation of the hip in the rabbit. The Journal of Bone and Joint Surgery. British volume, 44(1), 209-215.

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Vegan Design


 * Article Evaluation
 * As said in the article, this needs citation. The article talks about what are vegan clothes made of, this does not tell us how vegan designers improve their skills to be more efficient. It specifically talks to us about some designers, it needs more information about how to be good at vegan design, and how can we get some vegan clothes.


 * Sources
 * Dietrich, M., Fischer, M., & Walcher, D. (2016). Vegan Design. Lulu. com.
 * Oksanen, J. (2016). Design decisions and implementation details in vegan. Vignette of the package vegan. R package version, 2-4.

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