User:Giggles5858/Queen bee acid/Jnp014 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Giggles5858


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Queen_bee_acid&oldid=1012161647


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Queen_bee_acid&oldid=1004491065

Evaluate the drafted changes
I learned something new from your Wiki edits, I have never heard of Queen bee acid. In the section talking about Royal Jelly acid side effects I would say put a period after the word throat instead of a comma. The Royal Jelly acid side effects section could be included with the lead section sentence to give the reader a better understanding of what exactly Queen bee acid is. Your source does not look biased or anything. I can't wait to see what else you add to the article, but a good start.