User:Gigirojas/Feminine beauty ideal/Jade2047 Peer Review

I think that all of information that you have provided was very useful and helpful in educating people on this topic. I think you also did a good job at maintaining a neutral stance on the topic, and gave it a very matter of fact feel. I also liked how you used a modern example like Caitlyn Jenner to make you content more understandable for new readers. I think that you also have really good sources. I think in your conversation about hispanic women you could also add a bit about the different ways afro-latina women also experience different beauty standards in association with their lighter counterparts.

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