User:Gigirojas/Feminine beauty ideal/Likethefig Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

user: Gigirojas and Dellrums


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gigirojas/Feminine_beauty_ideal?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminine beauty ideal
 * Feminine beauty ideal

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

No lead has been added at this time.

Content

Dellrums' additions to the article "Evolutionary Perspectives of Feminine Beauty" and "Feminine Beauty Ideals for Transgender Women" is essential when discussing feminine beauty ideals and are important and necessary contributions to the article. The list of "youthful features" and "behavior cues of youth" detail well the different characteristics used to access a woman's reproductive "value".

I also appreciate Gigirojas' added section of Feminine Beauty Ideals for Latina/Hispanic women as it's important to include how beauty ideals differ among cultures and its origins. I'm sure they will include necessary and useful information for readers once they continue through their research and drafting stages.

The inclusion of the need for intersectional representation in the article is valuable and appreciated when viewed with a lens from our "Intersectionality" course.

Tone and Balance

The added content I have read appears neutral and unbiased. The inclusion of new sources help shine a light on the experiences of underrepresented groups, such as women of color and transgender women.

Sources and References

The inclusion of new sources that focus on Caribbean women and trans women help shine a light on the experiences of underrepresented groups. While women of all backgrounds must face feminine beauty standards in our society, it is important that we recognize the intersection between varying identities and experiences.

Organization

The added information seems well organized under separate sections, and the flow would make sense to an audience.

Images and Media

No new images or media are contributed at this time, although they have mentioned content gaps in included images.

Overall Impressions

Gigi's additions to the "Feminine Beauty Ideal" section of this article, I believe, are important and necessary contributions to the article. The list of "youthful features" and "behavior cues of youth" detail well the different characteristics used to access a woman's reproductive "value".

I'm sure once these users continues their journey in researching and adding information to this Wikipedia article, they will come across and include relevant and trustworthy sources to cite.