User:Gillianmarcuccio/Medium theory/LiLonghao Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gillianmarcuccio


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gillianmarcuccio/Medium_theory/LiLonghao_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello!

I think the article is overall great, and the source of the article is quite reliable, I like that! I think if you can more journal article about the topic would be nice!