User:Gingersauce/Homeless women in the United States/Cworrell09 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GingerSauce


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gingersauce/Homeless_women_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homeless women in the United States
 * Homeless women in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has been changed slightly to preview some of the new information that was being contributed to the page. You were also specific in each part of the article you are putting your contributions in. I think that the edits you have made thus far have done a good job of staying neutral and unbiased, to an already robust Wikipedia page. It does not have a biased or a persuasive tone and it does a good job of being factual and informational. Your edits to the language in the veterans and health sections are concise and clear so I don't think readers will have any trouble understanding or comprehending your edits. Based on what you have been contributing thus far, I think you have done a good job of adding to the article helping it to become more complete. The topic you picked already has a large Wikipedia page and a lot of information already on it so the edits and the language you are using is making it more nuanced. The sources you have also are recent and relevant which is good to make the article more about current homelessness. I feel like because there is so much to the Wikipedia page already and if you wanted to continue working on it, maybe just make more edits on the language used in some of the other sections or if you think it helps or continue to add more relevant sources.