User:Gingersauce/Homeless women in the United States/Xiyuanwu Peer Review

"it was found that female veterans were of younger age, often unemployed, and had a higher rate of having a mental illness." citation needed

"Mental illness is reported in 30% of homeless persons, and in 50% to 60% of homeless women." need to delete the hyperlink and add a citation

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