User:Giron-a-mo/Neritona granosa/Ncorpuz4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:Giron-a-mo/Neritona granosa
 * Link to the current version of the article:
 * Neritona granosa
 * Neritona granosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
Please answer the following questions in detail addressed to the classmate whose article you are reviewing. Remember this is constructive feedback, so be polite and clear in your suggestions for improving their article. We are all working together to improve the Wikipedia pages for the amazing species.

Use a different font style (bold or italic) for your answers so it is easy for the author to see your comments!


 * 1) First, what does the article do well? (Think about content, structure, complementing the existing article, writing, etc.)
 * 2) * Is there anything from your review that impressed you? The article has a bit more info about the Neritona Granosa and three more sections.  Also, there's no close paraphrasing.
 * 3) Check the main points of the article:
 * 4) * Does the article only discuss the species the article is about? (and not the genus or family) The discusses about the Neritona Granosa in the article and the not the genus or family.
 * 5) * Are the subtitles for the different sections appropriate? The subtitles for the different sections are appropriate.
 * 6) * Is the information under each section appropriate or should anything be moved? The information under each section are appropriate, so it shouldn't be moved.
 * 7) * Is the writing style and language of the article appropriate? (concise and objective information for a worldwide audience) The writing style and language in the article are appropriate.
 * 8) Check the sources:
 * 9) * Is each statement or sentence in the text linked to at least one source in the reference list with a little number? Yes
 * 10) * Is there a reference list at the bottom? Yes
 * 11) * Is each of those sources linked with a little number? Yes
 * 12) * What is the quality of the sources? Very Informative
 * 13) Give some suggestions on how to improve the article (think of anything that could be explained in more details or with more clarity or any issues addressed in the questions above):
 * 14) * What changes do you suggest and how would they improve the article? I think it needed a bit more info about the Neritona Granosa, but I think the Distribution sections need more than one sentence.
 * 15) * Is the article ready for prime-time and the world to see on Wikipedia? If not, how could the author improve the article to be ready? Not, yet.  I think the Distribution section needs a bit more information before its release.
 * 16) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?  The most important thing is to add more meat on the bones (more information and details) with thorough writing.
 * 17) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article?  I didn't see any close paraphrasing.