User:Giselle136/OLES2129

Improvements to Grey's Anatomy original Wikipedia page:

The first edit to the Grey's Anatomy page gave a very basic introduction to the show, its main actors and the main plot points in the first season. To improve this page, I would fix some of the grammar mistakes present and add a lot more detail about the show. The introduction to the page has very little information about the characters, only identifying the main character. I would give information about and add photos of each of the main characters as well as the actors themselves, and add more detail into the general plot summary. I would also explain the main plot points in greater detail, including which episodes they occurred in and add more photos of the various settings used in the show.