User:Gjimenez21/Epigenetics of anxiety and stress–related disorders/Ddav4 Peer Review

General info
Gjimenez21
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gjimenez21/Epigenetics of anxiety and stress–related disorders
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Epigenetics of anxiety and stress–related disorders

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: No changes to lead have been made

Content: So far I think the content that has been added has been a really good started, especially considering how much information the original wiki page already has. I feel like there a few parts of the "transgenerational epigenetic influences" paragraph sounds little bit wordy (?) or maybe like it's written more for a college essay rather than wikipedia, but I still think content in that paragraph and the rest of the draft adds new information to the original article.

Tone and Balance: The article is written in a neutral tone but may be able to be simplified in some parts.

Sources: I think a good amount of sources have been added that are up to date and from reliable sources

Organization: Sections where they expand on sections already found in the article will ass good information without lengthening the already long wikipedia page too much and the new sections will nicely into the original article

Overall impressions: Overall I think this is a really good start to editing this wikipedia page. The original is already very long which I can imagine will be hard finding a lot of new content to make large contributions to the page but the content that has been added so far is well done.