User:Gjimenez21/Epigenetics of anxiety and stress–related disorders/Najjar123 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gjimenez21/Epigenetics of anxiety and stress–related disorders
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Epigenetics of anxiety and stress–related disorders

Evaluate the drafted changes
The original article as a whole looks very organized, with a strong lead giving a good overview of the topic, neutral tone, and well written sections that are easy to read and digest. However, some of the sections would be better presented if more information was written under them along with more cited sources, and the draft is looking good as more detail was added towards the sections underneath the Transgenerational Epigenetic Influences area. The addition of the Hydrocortisone section also strengthens the use of that area in the article as well. Additionally, the sources added to the draft look reliable. However, I believe that the article lacks the use of images to help the reader of a better picture of the topic in order to understand what they are reading much better. Adding an image under Epigenetic modifications and possibly the lead section would be perfect.