User:Gjoe1973/Diablo Lake/Kaia UW Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Gjoe1973)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gjoe1973/Diablo_Lake/Kaia_UW_Peer_Review?venotify=created&action=edit
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Diablo Lake

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead has an introductory sentence and it is clear that the topic is about Diablo Lake. In the article, The Lead includes a brief description of each major section. The Lead includes everything that is covered in the original article and even provides additional information. The article is concise and very informative. The added information is relevant to the topic and up to date. The information is neutral without any heavily biased claims. There are no viewpoints and only provides facts about Diablo Lake, without persuading the reader to be in favor of one side or away from another.

The entire article is backed up by reliable secondary sources. The content of the sources reflects on the topic of the article. The sources are not thorough because there are no summaries for each reference. Some of the references are older while some still remain current. The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors but don't include marginalized individuals. There are no better sources but there are alternative sources that provide the same information. All the links provided in the references work. The content is very easy to digest and organized but there were a few minor grammatical errors. The article includes images of Diablo Lake and shows a picture of where the lake is located. The caption should be longer so that the reader can get a clear understanding of what the images are trying to express. The images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.

Overall, I enjoyed reading about Diablo Lake and what it has to offer. The strengths of this article are that it included pictures, description of the pictures, and included citations. I think that you could use newer sources and add more in depth information.