User:Gkc1021/Towel animal/Samjgreer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gkc1021, practicingtoedit


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gkc1021/Towel animal


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Towel animal

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that what you guys have is really good. You have a good neutral tone, and you added more information that isn't in the original article. Most of the information you added is interesting and feels natural, not like you're grasping at straws and adding fluff to the article. My only real criticisms of you article are things that I assume you guys already know. You need to add sources and photos and fill out some sections, but those areas are clearly laid out in your draft. As a first draft, it works and I think you have a good foundation and I think that once it gets more fleshed out you guys will have made significant additions to the original article.