User:Gkim70/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Johns Hopkins Bayview Medical Center


 * Article Evaluation
 * - overall neutral tone
 * - some subjective statements
 * - only one citation and one link to the hospital page (this needs to be fixed)
 * - overall summary about place present, but lacking in:
 * - explanation of its long distinguished history
 * - current day care units
 * - what it looks like, relationship to Hopkins and Baltimore
 * - less about extraneous information, more about Bayview itself
 * - Talk page: two comments on edits page, not much interaction


 * Sources
 * https://www.hopkinsmedicine.org/johns_hopkins_bayview/about_hospital/history.html
 * https://catalyst.library.jhu.edu/catalog/bib_2441435

Option 2

 * Article title
 * The Henry Phipps Psychiatric Clinic


 * Article Evaluation
 * - started off with strong summary of how it started
 * - good history of founding and development present
 * - overall neutral tone
 * - some subjective statements
 * - not much more info other than history and list of notable faculty --> needs more info on today
 * - pretty good citations so far
 * - Talk page: some interaction, found out they are between Hopkins students who took class in 2015 :)


 * Sources
 * https://www.hopkinsguides.com/hopkins/view/Johns_Hopkins_Psychiatry_Guide/787150/all/Phipps_History
 * https://www.hopkinsmedicine.org/psychiatry/about/
 * https://professorships.jhu.edu/professorship/henry-phipps-professorship-in-psychiatry/

Option 3

 * Article title
 * William H. Welch


 * Article Evaluation
 * - good summary
 * - biography format clearly present
 * - some awkward pronoun placements
 * - mostly facts present, thus neutral tone
 * - has solid citations, can improve
 * - Talk page: same as Option 2


 * Sources
 * https://www.jhsph.edu/about/history/heroes-of-public-health/william-henry-welch.html
 * https://jscholarship.library.jhu.edu/handle/1774.2/44448
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3124910/

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Pseudohypertension


 * Article Evaluation
 * - lacking in information
 * - many citations, but for limited number of lines
 * - needs more information on how it is related to Osler
 * - neutral tone
 * - Talk page: none


 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/4000185
 * http://rwjms1.umdnj.edu/shindler/osler.html

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Mary Lou Clements-Mann


 * Article Evaluation
 * - okay summary
 * - some references
 * - not a proper biography format
 * - not enough information
 * - Talk page: none


 * Sources
 * https://centerforimmunizationresearch.org/about-us/founder/
 * http://www.medadvocates.org/disciplines/humanrights/hrightsmann.html