User:Glacey1412/sandbox

notes on the Burgas Alexandroupoli pipeline The article sticks to the topic of the construction of the pipeline and that it didn't fall through.

IN the article it does stay neutral it doesn't say well the gas line should of been built I don't know why it didn't. IT just lists facts on the governments that were trying to make it work and the reasons why they wanted to do it.

The information was defiantly underrepresented they didn't ad enough on why they couldn't do the project who all helped it was short and sweat on some topic in the article.

I checked some references and they matched his facts but I saw somethings he could of used in his article that wasn't put in it. They were neutral sources as well strictly just information on the topic.

The information was last updated 2017 summer so its pretty up to date.

In the talk article someone commented that it was gas not oil so how true can it be.

the overall rating was a c on Wikipedia

It doesn't really persuade me in any way it just talks about in Russia they wanted to make a oil pipeline.

Article Draft Proposal
Mike Trout I’m going to do my article on Mike Trout he’s one of my favorite baseball players and I used to play baseball in high school. The article written on him is a C-class article and needs some work. In the article the it doesn’t talk a lot about his early life and what he did at a young age. It also doesn’t menschen much about his personal life and what he does out side of baseball. There needs to be more detail about his performances in his years of being in the MLB as well. I don’t like how it doesn’t say anything about him being a Philadelphia eagles fan it would be nice to see what he’s interested in. What I also want to add to the article is his abilities his speed his strength of the field to show how impressive he really is. Overall, it’s not a bad article all it needs is more information on some subjects and sum grammar fixes'''. ''' References Youtube/30:30onmiketrout User:Glacey1412/sandbox/aritcledraft

Vetter's Feedback: Hey Grant, I think this could work, and that it would be an exciting article to edit! What I want to stress at this point is that you really need to start looking in more depth at your sources and finding specific information that you could add to the article. I think some additions about his early life could be useful. Your discussion of how more details about his years in the MLB sounds like a really good opportunity. SO at this point, start working with your sources so that you can identify particular passages that contain information not already in the article. Bring these passages (in any form) to our next class next Tuesday so that we can begin doing some drafting of your additions. Let's be sure to talk about your sources during our conference as well. You're really going to want to find some periodical and other types of sources beyond youtube and yahoo. Best,

-Dr. Vetter

Article Draft
first I wanted to take out the Millvale Meteor it is made up its in there as a joke. Another thing I want to take out from Early life is this sentence. “Angels scout Greg Morhardt, who had played in the minor leagues with Trout's father, claimed Mike was the fastest and strongest 17-year-old he had ever seen.” I looked at the web site and didn’t see anything on The Angel scout saying mike trout was the strongest and fastest 17 ever said. But, it did say ‘he was one of the best 17-year-old baseball players he has ever seen.’ In early life it just said he is a Philadelphia Phillies fan he is a fan all Philadelphia teams not just the Philies. It doesn’t talk about how he meets his wife in high school. Also, that he first committed to East Carolina University before entering the draft. I want to add a lot of small stuff like When he was hurt during the 2016 doesn’t say what team it was, which was against the Cleveland Indians. I want to also ad his 60-yard dash time is 6.53 and his bench press 310 pounds. There should be a tab with all of his running times, drill times, and lifting times this is all of MLB.com/miketrout:workout. On the section Off the field I want to take most of it out the Millvale Meteor come up again so that must come out. What I want to put in is his activities outside of baseball such as friends he hangs out with. One of his good friends is Zach Ertz he is the tight end for the Philadelphia eagles. His statues on how many kids he has which is zero. Charities he donates to or ones that he currently runs it is good to know how he makes a difference on the field. Mike bought both of his parent’s cars as well for Mother’s Day and Father’s Day. The last thing to add was a tab on his draft class and the scouts looking at him.//////// Mike went 25th in the draft and the scout that was high on mike was Charlie Saponara there is a link to his name to see the full scouting report. The number one pick in his draft was Stephen Strasburg who is a starting pitcher for the Nationals. Mike trout went 25th but is ranked much higher than Stephen Strasburg as Mike is ranked the number one baseball player in the MLB.//// He is a two time all star game MVP winnner in back to back years of 2014 and 2015.For winning the mvp of the all star game he accrued two new cars and then layder donated them to a charity. Trout has signed a contract of 144.5 million dollars in 2014. /young amateur career/Mike had more than tremendous athletic ability. He had tremendous patience for a kid. He could sit through an entire game on TV by the age of 8 and was years ahead of his youth-league teammates in terms of skill and demeanor. His coach in Ripken League and Little League, Mike Kavanagh, remembers that, at 9, Mike was one of the best players in a league of 12-year-olds.13 1s He shagged fly balls with high school kids and served as team bat boy for Millville Senior High as a boy. IN his highschool career MIke Trout  Playing for the Millville Senior High Thunderbolts, Mike started making headlines as a sophomore for coach Roy Hallenbeck. One of his best moments came when he took the mound for a game against the school’s biggest rival, the Vineland Fighting Clan. Millville hadn’t beaten Vineland since 2003. Leading a squad of nine seniors, Mike fired a complete-game two-hitter to win 2–1. During his junior year, Mike twirled a no-hitter against Egg Harbor Tonwship, fanning 18 batters. In the state playoffs that year, the Thunderbolts were defeated by Cherry Hill East. The Cougars intentionally walked Mike every time up, including once with the bases loaded and another time when he represented the potential winning run.11 Trout would get heavily scouted thorough

Trout would be timed in highschool in the 60 yard dash he ran a 6.53. Was also able to bench 405 five times in his high school career .

EArly life Mike had more than tremendous athletic ability. He had tremendous patience for a kid. He could sit through an entire game on TV by the age of 8 and was years ahead of his youth-league teammates in terms of skill and demeanor. His coach in Ripken League and Little League, Mike Kavanagh, remembers that, at 9, Mike was one of the best players in a league of 12-year-olds. Mike was a big kid, just like his dad.

off the field//// Mike is spoke of being one of the most humble guys and still goes to his favorite burger joint in Millville. Trout has bought his mom and dad brand new cars and has a net worth 20 million dollars. The gift appears to be a brand new Infiniti SUV QX80, which runs around $63,00

Peer review by Jake
I am writing this to try to give you some feed back on your article to help you maybe make it better. It is good that you found the quote about how he is one of the best 17 year olds that has ever seen. it is important to make sure quotes are right in the article so people are getting the right information. It is good that you found he met his wife in high school that is a very interesting fact. it seems like you have a lot of little edits to make to certain parts of the article so that will help make the article a lot better. You will have to word things a little differently before you add it to the article and you will also have to add citations to the things you add to the article. Overall you gave a lot of good information to add to the article.

Article Edits- Autumn Marlin
You are definitely going in the right direction when it comes to adding and removing the right information. To make it easier to write a wiki-styled article I would recommend breaking up the information into different sub-groups. With the information divided, it will make it easier for you to add proper headings on the article page to boost word count. Subdivisions within the article also make it easier for the audience to understand and retain the information provided. Also, it might be helpful if you were to add a graphic or an info box for a quick look at the information in the article. Both photos and info boxes can be added by hitting the insert tab at the top of your article while in visual editing. The information that you have is clearly outlined and looks like it's going to be very beneficial for the article and its audience.