User:GlaciersareCool/Basal Channels/Star457 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GlaciersareCool


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GlaciersareCool/Basal_Channels?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
In your Categories section you have this sentence "Basal channels are distributed into three main categories by how and where they are formed relative to an ice shelf's grounding line", and I think it would be useful to list out the three main categories after a colon to introduce them to the reader before you go in depth.

It might be useful to link the words Greenland and Antarctic ice sheets within your writing.

For someone who is completely clueless on your project, it might be useful to describe what a channel is.

In the section "Instability due to basal channels", you start a lot of sentence with "When basal...". I recommend switching up how you start your sentences to avoid repetitiveness.

I think the lead into your article should have an overview of the different sections you choose to go into so that the user knows what to expect as they continue reading.

Overall, nice work! I think your article is very informative and I definitely feel like I learned a lot as someone with no prior knowledge of Basal Channels.