User:Glassgardens/User:Noahnjt/Confessions (Minato)/Ajc9k.mt Peer Review

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Group 6


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 * User:Noahnjt/Confessions (Minato) - Wikipedia
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like the lead is really good! Length is good there.

Under Characters - is there another layout (like a chart) you could use? I know wiki doesn't love the bullet point structure so this may be something to consider.

Your themes are really fleshed out, I enjoyed reading about them. Definitely continue on in this direction.

I really like the format of the awards!!! This is good!!!

Reiterating what was said in class - an info box and/or image of the movie poster by "film adaptation" could be a good addition. It will break up the structure of the page.

The plot section is LONG. It looks like you have already noted that though in the section header.

Overall the article looks good. It just needs some small polishes. Here are your top three concerns: finalizing the themes section, editing the plot, and adding in citations. Just some small things! Good work!