User:Gloriazhao0905/Cross-cultural communication/GizelCenizal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gloriazhao0905


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gloriazhao0905/Cross-cultural_communication?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is very informative and is diligently-cited. It explains the concepts of spoken language and nonverbal communication quite well. However, there are a few stylistic and grammatical errors that are found within this article. Notably, the use of personal pronouns such as 'our' and 'we' are not generally recommended to be used as Wikipedia article should portray a sense of objectivity and neutrality. Additionally, the writing style for this article may come off as persuasive, especially with the hook for the article's introductory sentence. Adjusting the use of pronouns and the style of this article will benefit it greatly. For example, rather than "In today's society, most of we are likely to interact and communicate with people whose background, culture, or values are different from us." something along the line of "Cross culture communication refers to the interaction between people which often involves individuals hailing from different identities, cultures, and values." may be more appropriate.

Otherwise, this article is very well researched. Great job!