User:Glowham2/Fort Laramie National Historic Site/02jtroxel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Glowham2)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Glowham2/Fort Laramie National Historic Site
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Glowham2/Fort Laramie National Historic Site

Evaluate the drafted changes
You did a wonderful job writing this article. The information is strong, however I would consider adding titles/subtitles. This would help differentiate the lead from the rest of the information. In addition to your lead, adding some pictures would help the content of the article be more clear. The content is accurate and up to date. The sources are up to date as well. The grammar and spelling is correct and there are no errors. The tone is neutral and there is a balance of information. There are no viewpoints that stick out or are covered too much. There is no noticeable bias. This article does a great job closing the equity gap as this article did not exist before, and this subject is important and well known in Wyoming.

I think overall the content and related information is very accurate, concise and up to date. The images and titles could add more clarity but other than that everything looks great!