User:Glowham2/Fort Laramie National Historic Site/Kwesthoff27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Glowham2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Glowham2/Fort Laramie National Historic Site - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fort Laramie National Historic Site - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sandbox draft is great, content is orderly and in a neutral tone. ￼ The addition of some history and architecture of Fort Laramie is beneficial to the main page and adds depth to the article. The sources used are scholarly and good sources of information for your article. The sandbox draft does not have the articles listed, so it is hard to tell where that information is from, but the sources are added in the main article. Overall great addition to the Fort Laramie page!