User:Gmarinello19/William Grimes (ex-slave)/Angelknives009 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gmarinello19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * William Grimes (ex-slave) - there's nothing in the sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * William Grimes (ex-slave)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has yet to be updated. The current lead for the article does include an introductory statement that concisely provides a brief summary of the articles main topic. The lead sentence also provides a brief descriptions of the main sections in the article. All the content added is accurate and appropriately used within the article. Everything is up-to-date and cited. The new additions to the article are stated in a neutral tone. Nothing is heavily biased or geared toward a particular position. There is not much to evaluate based on the contribution, but there's plenty of room for improvement. I would suggest adding a section detailing Grimes' slave narrative and another possible section with the reception it received. I remember in class a newspaper clipping including Grimes' death and the people's reaction to it. That would be worthy to include. Moving forward with edits, I suggest working in the sandbox. It's a good place to keep track of changes and slowly work on each section one by one. All the links you have added along with your contributions work perfectly. The structure of the draft is fairly organized and the contributions added are neutral toned and nicely written. The article does not feature an image, but adding one would greatly enhance the article. Overall, I love the work you have added and look forward to reading the finished article :)