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October 30, 2019 - Tristen Laurie's Peer Review of Wikipedia Assignment

1. Grammar and spelling- what sentences or words need to be changed so that they are spelled correctly and grammatically correct?

There is nothing written below so there is no grammar or spelling errors at the moment.

2. Readability- Can you understand what was written without a scientific dictionary, what suggestions would you make for substitutions of words that can be used to increase clarity? Do any words need to be defined in the text so that readability will be improved?

There is nothing written below so there is nothing I can read at the moment.

3. Following Directions- Are there three paragraphs (3-5 sentences each) does the first paragraph explain the method, do the second paragraphs describe an application of the method that lead to a discovery. I'm expecting that HOW the technology was used and WHAT the discovery was that came about because of the application of this technology. Did the student meet these requirements? What needs to be done so that they can meet this criteria.

There is nothing written below so there is nothing to be followed with at the moment.