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Article Evaluation

In reference to the article about Charles the Bald In reference to the articles talk page there is a dispute on what date Charles the Balds coronation took place with not update from the editor of the article. I will inquire about the dispute and try to find a reliable reference for the correct coronation date. The article has edits as current as of October 3, 2017 which is a good sign that information is being updated to reflect accuracy.
 * The section about his reign in the west is without citations
 * The article is thorough in its information about this historical figure
 * There are a number of visual aids which enrich the article
 * The article has an overall neutral bias
 * This article is a part of a few different WikiProjects to include WikiProject Germany and WikiProject France
 * The references that the editor uses seem to be legitimate sources from historical texts and journals
 * The one and only external link provided does not seem to work as it would not load
 * For the introduction of the article it seems a bit confusing due to all of the information being expressed. I would maybe condense down some of the information for example I would remove the fact that he was the grandson of Charlemagne which while interesting it is not relevant to Charles the Bald himself.