User:Gmd114/Armed Forces of National Liberation (Venezuela)/Fudgevillain Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gmd114


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gmd114/Armed Forces of National Liberation (Venezuela)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Armed Forces of National Liberation (Venezuela)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your additions to this article definitely made it a lot more informative than the original. I had no knowledge of the subject going into your article and by the end, I definitely felt more educated on the topic.

The one thing I feel is hurting your draft is the grammar. Just a brief review of the draft should fix this. There are no glaring mistakes other than words needing to be added or sentences needing to be condensed/separated with a period. For example: "Terrorists had turned to political targets. For instance, on September 13, there was an attempt to break up a meeting of Betancourt's Democratic Action (AD) party in Caracas which was held to observe the party's 22nd anniversary." (Changes have been made in bold).

You've added a lot of sources which is a huge contribution to the article, but I feel like there could still be a few more with everything you've written.

Overall, this is a very positive contribution to the original article and I look forward to seeing the finalized piece so I can gain some more knowledge on the subject. I enjoyed reading it.