User:Gmenezchahade/Life and Times of Frederick Douglass/Callencamp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I'm reviewing Gmenezchahade


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gmenezchahade/Life_and_Times_of_Frederick_Douglass?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Life and Times of Frederick Douglass

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Great job! I think it would be helpful to include a Lead section so for example:

The Life and Times of Frederick Douglass was written in....by....

and put that at the top so you can delete where it says Article Draft, Lead, and Body

Great organization! I like how you sectioned it out into parts. Another good thing to add throughout your article is links. So you could like things like Talbot County, people, Underground Railroad, and things like that. Check last sentence of chapters 5-8 section. Great job being objective! If you need to add more you can always add a section on themes from the narrative, but you already have a lot of great information written down!