User:Gmoore12/Collodictyon/HugginsLogan Peer Review

I think your article did a good job explaining the physiological makeup of your organism that you chose. You did a good job going through the body plan and explains the functions of each section. I liked how you organized your writing, but seeing where you found what information is a little hard to follow. It would be nice to see in text citations to help better check your secondary resources. It was nice that you compared the organism to having some of the same structures as amoebas to help get a better idea on the size of the organism. Your information allowed the reader to pull from outside information to form connections.

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