User:Gmp76/2022 University of Idaho killings/Ashleyrv2018 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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Evaluate the drafted changes
"These deaths occurred on the same day as a shooting at the University of Virginia that killed three members of the university’s football team and wounded two other people. " Is this sentence necessary to include?

I think you should include the role that social media/ Tik Tok had on the popularity of the case.

Could you focus more on who Kohberger is?